Road to Threesome Feedback Requested

Recently I've decided to push myself with the Road to Threesome comic by trying to actually complete some of these pages that's had its art laid out for some time. I've done the cover but it might need a few tweaks here and there, but I didn't want to upload anything yet without a couple of pages knocked out first.

Half of the first page is pretty much done, but one thing I'm concerned about is how much text is in each panel, and since I can only upload images up to 2040x2040, if that affects how readable it is, since some panels are really text-heavy, particularly the first couple of pages that focus on Kim's thoughts on her relationship with Ron, getting curious about having a threesome, and if it would spark things up or destroy their relationship.

As most of you saw with the New Year's post (can't believe we're in May already), the original plan was to do six panels per page. Out of curiosity, I tried to make a large image out of a single panel, and now I'm wondering which way is better: Six panels per page, a large image of a single panel, or both to allow more viewing options. If I do both, I'm also more likely to upload the larger single panel images after a full page is done, so if say, I find that panel 4 needs a correction when working on panel 6, it's not already uploaded.

So here's what I originally had in mind for how it would look. I ask not to upload this on any sites given how incomplete it is. This is more of a test if the text is fine or not. If I make it bigger, it'll interfere with everything else.

And points can go out to anyone who can identify whoever the stripper is cosplaying as in the third panel. I felt like I needed something interesting going on in the background and figured what the hell, let's put my first ever waifu there. It was tempting to put someone like Vivian or Heather at first, but I only got things right after putting our cosplayer stripper in already. No backsies.

Anyway, here's how the first panel would look as a single image. It's nicer to have these bigger because sometimes it's just nice to have these fill up the entire screen, but it also brings out some of the vector imperfections and I'm too lazy to fix all of them.

So anyway, thoughts would be appreciated since the last thing I want is to throw this out there and it becomes a headache for everyone else.

Oh, and here's what I have as the cover so far. I'm currently not digging Barkin's smile and looking up screencaps isn't helping much since that's what his smile actually looks like. Maybe removing the individual teeth lines? It's not like everyone else is completely on model anyway because boobah.

The final version will be much larger. I also want to do something of a "afterword" page explaining why I made a full bloody comic that's more or less focused on what this is really all about: Providing a somewhat believable way for Yori to finally have sex with Ron without ruining his relationship with Kim and keeping with the canon. In the same page, there's some bonus images showing what happens afterwards, and wanted to make it all non-explicit:

• Bonnie is shopping while Junior and Hirotaka carry their bags.
• Drakken's sleeping in Shego's lap at the karaoke bar while Barkin is just glad he gets to hold Shego.
• Kim, Ron, Yori, Rufus and Hana are all wearing kimonos at a festival watching fireworks. Naturally, Hana's not an infant anymore.
• And whatever this is:

A lot of art is still far from complete, though. When there's enough momentum and finished pages, I'll open up a new gallery page. Until then, stay groovy, fellow chaps.