Just throwing it out there. Aside from real life stuff, other projects and more hours at work, I wasn't exactly satisfied with how some of the art on pages 3 and 4 looked and decided to redo them. Some things you make better and some things you make worse. Anyway, still alive but it'll take longer than expected.
+1 month of waiting, okay)
ReplyDeleteI know that you're busy so this is something of a message for future you to read. As you might know I write some KP smut but I've been on a break. I'm still keeping track of new ideas and I've recently got one that I feel is more suited to images than words. This isn't a request or commission; I just thought I'd share it with you since the tone seems like a close match for your work and you might get some ideas from it or even like it enough to adapt parts of it so that it doesn't go to waste.
ReplyDeleteIt's a series of connected imagine spots and the title could ape off the current Marvel series "What If". It follows Kim and Ron going through their day as a perfect loving couple, holding hands and sharing chaste kisses, but also causing every girl they meet to imagine "what if Ron was *my* boyfriend" (plus a special imagine spot at the end).
The cover image could be Kim and Ron looking lovingly into each others eyes while unnoticed in the background are all the other girls looking on in conspiratorial manner. The rest follows (split into a separate comment because of the character limit):
We start at lunch in the cafeteria with Tara watching Kim and Ron holding hands. There's a text block "What if he was *my* boyfriend..." and then a thought bubble expanding from Tara's head to encompass the rest of the page. We see Ron dragging Tara by the hand as he convinces his blushing 'girlfriend' to follow him into the janitor's closet. She is both embarrassed but also very turned on as Ron gets her shirt up and starts sucking her tits while Tara wavers between moaning that they'll get caught and begging him for more.
DeleteNext its cheer practice and Ron is giving Kim lots of verbal encouragement as Bonnie looks on jealously. In her "What if he was *my* boyfriend..." spot Bonnie and Ron are naked in the showers, her cheer uniform having been torn off and left wet on the floor as he fucks her against the wall under the spray of hot water. All the while he's telling her how her breasts are so much bigger than Kim's and what a tight pussy she has and how she's the best lay in school as she screams his name and tells him to fuck her harder.
After school our couple is at the mall where Monique holds up a new low cut blouse from the rack and Kim asks an already blushing Ron if she'd look good in it. Meanwhile Monique is imagining herself emerging from the Club Banana changing rooms in an even sexier 'clubbing' type dress ("How do I look?") and the moment Ron sees it his eyes go hungry with lust. Monique clearly enjoys his reaction as he drags her back inside, lifts one of her legs onto the bench and pushes his face underneath the dress to eat her out.
Having been called on a mission they're in the back of a plane joined by Yori who observes Kim rubbing Ron's neck as she helps him with his pre-mission jitters. Yori meanwhile imagines how she would be comforting him if she was his girlfriend. In her thought bubble Ron is very much distracted from all his worries as Yori's mouth envelopes his dick, eagerly sucking him off and then swallowing his entire load which leaves Ron relaxed and ready to focus on the mission at hand.
Then it's a battle inside Drakken's lair with Shego noticing how Kim and Ron are able to operate so seamlessly as a team, acting on each others commands without hesitation. She imagines herself crawling naked on a leash, her 'master' Ron ordering her to service him and Shego playfully going along with the role play as she submissively presses her big breasts around his erection. It's at the conclusion of the tit job when he's messily cumming on her face that she reminds him that next time it's *his* turn to be the obedient pet.
DeleteArriving home after dark Ann watches through the kitchen window as the couple walk up the driveway pressed side to side with their arms around one another. She's imaging herself in that copy of Kim's mission outfit that she once wore, bringing Ron in to receive his 'reward' for a job well done by bending over the counter and offering up her pussy. Squeezing her tits as he gets close Ann tells him "Good boy" as she feels him finish inside her and leaving the happy MILF with a dripping creampie.
Finally Kim and Ron share a good night kiss on the porch but there's a *mutual* thought bubble expanding from the couple, imagining them in Kim's bedroom in what is clearly their first time. Kim is blushing as her top comes off and Ron gets to see her naked breasts ("They're beautiful KP"), Ron pausing with his dick at her entrance ("Be gentle Ron"), and then some virginal love making followed by a second/third round of not-so-virginal sex that ends with Kim and Ron cuddling together under the moonlight.
Could also have a bonus image for the back cover: Top of the page has Kim and Ron asleep together in bed as they were at the end, a dream bubble now coming from Ron with a single large panel showing him in the center of an orgy with all the other girls featured in the comic while Kim is in her own bubble with her arms angrily crossed, forcing its way into the bottom right corner of Ron's bubble as she exclaims "Hey, hands off! He's still *my* boyfriend."
I expect there are a few parts that aren't to your liking and you could certainly modify them. I don't get the impression that you'd like Ann/Ron so that could be dropped entirely and it seems that you prefer that only Kim ever has full sex with Ron so the Bonnie day dream might focus more on him tearing off her wet cheer uniform and then fingering her under the showerhead as he praises how sexy her body is with her being extremely turned on by his words.
I do like the concept, but at the rate I'm going with this next update, I doubt I'll be doing any bigger things down the line.
DeleteWill the scene from "Dirty Laundry" appear in "Road to threesome" 9maybe from another angle) or it will stay as Ron's dream?
ReplyDeleteI'm planning on implementing it at a similar angle. It won't be a copy/paste job.
DeleteFrom Bootytasting too?)
DeleteNice to hear that.
Any plans for 250k views?
ReplyDeleteI didn't even realize the view counter wasn't showing up on my end, probably due to the anti-whatever plugins I've got. So not at the moment, but maybe I'll think of something. Big emphasis on maybe.
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